tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post5489061643444261105..comments2013-08-23T09:19:44.857-07:00Comments on Lady of the House: PrologueJean-Mariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-27910612114838466972013-08-23T09:19:44.857-07:002013-08-23T09:19:44.857-07:00Thank you for the kind words Gypsy and welcome to ...Thank you for the kind words Gypsy and welcome to this story!<br />Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-71349278146193223352013-08-20T10:30:52.073-07:002013-08-20T10:30:52.073-07:00You have a gift for writing- looking forward to mo...You have a gift for writing- looking forward to more!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04159426942571368190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-89000811814550714002013-07-22T06:27:25.431-07:002013-07-22T06:27:25.431-07:00My goodness, your comment had me rolling! How do y...My goodness, your comment had me rolling! How do you come up with these things? I lol'd so hard at the wetting themselves part...<br /><br />Yes, they killed her. She was a hindrance to the family with her filling the little lord's head with tales of love when he should be marrying money, so they got rid of her. Zach married the wealthy heiress and they all lived happily ever after! Or so they hoped...<br /><br />Knowing you, I'm sure a LOT more will come to mind<br />Thanks hun!Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-47248271673401706212013-07-18T04:32:58.632-07:002013-07-18T04:32:58.632-07:00The sons of bitches killed her?!!!!?! I hope she a...The sons of bitches killed her?!!!!?! I hope she and her unborn child haunt them until they accidentally set fire to their bedsheets. I hope she makes them wet themselves in a very public setting! I'll think up more stuff later n wish I'd thought of it now cuz I have to get up too early for my taste lately.<br /><br />Fabulous start!!! mypalsim1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08612512921461620603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-44214782300857677702013-07-17T07:22:33.732-07:002013-07-17T07:22:33.732-07:00Haha, don't worry, most skimmed over that litt...Haha, don't worry, most skimmed over that little detail.<br /><br />Why would there be a ghost?? Everyone that did her wrong is DEFINITELY dead already... LOL, maybe...<br /><br />:DJean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-21246735384283975372013-07-16T13:01:18.314-07:002013-07-16T13:01:18.314-07:00Ah excuse my potatoes for eyes. I skipped over the...Ah excuse my potatoes for eyes. I skipped over the year at the top. <br /><br />So... potential restless ghost roaming around Azalea Manor??<br /><br />:D :DTrish (Acid)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05157822101535941627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-51619429438829800022013-07-16T11:41:20.612-07:002013-07-16T11:41:20.612-07:00Yes, they burned her alive. Back then servants wer...Yes, they burned her alive. Back then servants were disposable like a used toy. The upper class just didn't care what happened to them.<br /><br />I wonder if his father knew about that baby? Maybe he did and that's why they chose to end her. They could have just fired her and have her removed from the estate. But with a Lord's baby inside her.... disgrace! Zachary would've left with her and his father couldn't take that chance. Too much shame for the family.<br /><br />Happiness? Back then? Uncommon thing! You do what your parents say, because they know what's right. If they said marry the rich girl, you marry the rich girl!!<br />Surely they blackmailed Zachary with something, because even though he was in love with the servant girl, he married the rich girl.<br /><br />Thanks for reading Dais!Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-53992397061128759092013-07-16T09:35:13.638-07:002013-07-16T09:35:13.638-07:00Oh no! They burned her to death! So, so cruel! ...Oh no! They burned her to death! So, so cruel! I wonder if it would have made a difference if Zachary's father had known about the baby, but I doubt it. His sons happiness wasn't as important to him as his own family name and status. So very sad, but really good Jean Marie! I'm definitely looking forward to when you start posting it! Daisies Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09529096430399435508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-113465646640935182013-07-16T07:47:40.002-07:002013-07-16T07:47:40.002-07:00Tell me about it... Back then "Name, Responsi...Tell me about it... Back then "Name, Responsibility, Honor & Wealth" came first - "Family" last. "Love" held no importance whatsoever... Especially ignored if between an upper class and a servant like here.<br /><br />They took extreme measurements to deal with disgrace. A lord carrying on with a servant instead of a "proper" lady of heritage was a disgrace...<br /><br />This prologue is set a hundred+ years before the actual story!<br />Zachary never found out what his family did. All he knows was that she died in a tragic fire...<br /><br />Thanks Acid!Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-41342296377646311192013-07-16T06:14:18.593-07:002013-07-16T06:14:18.593-07:00They were given instructions to keep her away from...They were given instructions to keep her away from the wedding. The duke, Zach's father wanted to make sure she didn't stall it and everything went smoothly. After the wedding they needed to take care of her... and that's what they did. When they returned to the hall, the reception was in full swing. Zachary never even knew...<br /><br />Thanks Gem!Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-7295677820355683182013-07-16T04:46:14.199-07:002013-07-16T04:46:14.199-07:00Woah!! :| The things some people do to preserve th...Woah!! :| The things some people do to preserve their "name and wealth" <br /><br />Will Zachary ever find out the truth? The story really got off to a good start JM :) Will be keeping an eye out. Trish (Acid)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05157822101535941627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-48905548394539870452013-07-15T14:13:16.531-07:002013-07-15T14:13:16.531-07:00:O
Oh my god... I didn't expect that! I though...:O<br />Oh my god... I didn't expect that! I thought the boys were just going to continue with their mean words and then leave her unconcious, did. not. see the fire coming. Wow...<br /><br />Great start! Excited for the first chapter! :)gemly_teddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16384732672776498936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-3805348947996097292013-07-15T09:42:23.148-07:002013-07-15T09:42:23.148-07:00The girl didn't survive sadly. All Zachary kno...The girl didn't survive sadly. All Zachary knows is that she died in a tragic fire. Only 4 people know what went on over there. His cousins, his father and the dead girl...<br /><br />The first chapter of this story is set in the present, so years after this happen. But knowing what happened then makes it easier to understand what will be happening in the present.<br /><br />Hope I don't disappoint :)<br />First try at horror-ish!<br />Thanks hun!Jean-Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10197541538215744061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9168368850441374988.post-15198405018376136692013-07-15T07:58:06.849-07:002013-07-15T07:58:06.849-07:00Wow! Poor Zachary, he'll be really hurt when h...Wow! Poor Zachary, he'll be really hurt when he finds out that his father betrayed him. I'm also willing to bet that he knew she was pregnant. Poor girl. I hope she gets out and then gets her revenge.<br /><br />Sounds great so far, can't wait!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.com